or, Just a few words
to the wise…
Okay, how many of you know what a tossed salad is?
Yep, thought so.
And why is it called a “tossed” salad?
Yes, you’re right — because you toss it with the serving
utensils in order to mix the ingredients together, of course. Or, in some recipes,
you put a lid on the bowl and shake the whole works.
So why would you write “He tossed the empty container in the
wastebasket.”???
To me, that says he either picked up the wastebasket and
shook it, or he used a stick or something similar to stir and “toss” or mix the
contents.
That’s why I will edit that sentence to say “He tossed the
empty container into the
wastebasket.”
You write “She jumped in the car and slammed the door,” and
I will edit it to “She jumped into the car and slammed the door” because
otherwise you’re telling me she was hopping up and down inside the car (a
convertible with the top down maybe? Or a child jumping on the seats?), whether
slamming the door was a result of the jumping or simply happened with or after
the jumping.
That’s just one of my picky little correction points.
#2
Do you know the difference between “wave” and “waive”? (Besides
the extra letter in the middle, I mean.) Apparently some authors — and editors,
I’m sorry to say — do not know there’s any difference, because I’ve seen it numerous
times in final galleys.
You can wave your hand at someone either to catch their
attention or as a way of saying goodbye. If you were to waive your hand…Wow! I
don’t think you really can do that, although Lady Macbeth would have gladly
done so, probably. Dictionary definition of “waive” is “to officially say that
you will not use or require something that you are allowed to have or that is
usually required.” You can waive your right to a jury trial, or the committee
may waive the requirement of a fee with your application. But to waive your
hand would mean you want to throw it away, relinquish it voluntarily, or put
off immediate consideration of it (as in, just ignore the darn thing). Hmmm.
That leads us to “waver” and “waiver.” A ghost may waver in
front of you, or a person unsteady on his or her feet might waver from side to
side. Neither would waiver, because, first of all, “waiver” is not a verb; it
is not something you do. A waiver is a noun, a thing, usually a legal document
that puts aside some otherwise restricting rule or necessary step in a process.
#3
Last but not least, let me make a recommendation. At some
point before you say you’re done with a book and it has your approval, use the
Search feature of your Word program and see how many times you have used the
word “peek” — you might be surprised at how often it has crept in! And let me
suggest that you try using “peer” in some of those spots if you really need to
indicate to a reader that someone was sneakily looking somewhere or at
something. Your homework for this evening is to look up the dictionary
definitions for each:
Peek = ………..
Peer = ………..
And don’t you dare use “peak” or “pique” instead of “peek” —
or vice versa.
Thanks!
~Nan
