tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5926989890703867833.post6332278865182129519..comments2024-02-10T03:13:55.366-05:00Comments on Behind The Garden Gate: Carving Into Your Manuscript By Layla Chase The Wild Rose Presshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10788008988163575341noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5926989890703867833.post-91478537815146468382023-10-21T22:02:53.905-04:002023-10-21T22:02:53.905-04:00Niice post thanks for sharingNiice post thanks for sharingElisha Limhttps://elishalim.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5926989890703867833.post-40281559479070263592013-11-11T13:39:00.615-05:002013-11-11T13:39:00.615-05:00In example #6 wouldn't the end of that sentenc...In example #6 wouldn't the end of that sentence, ...then Caleb sensed danger., also be telling? The prickling of the hair on his arms and the sudden quiet show us he senses danger. If it were me, I'd probably just delete it. What do you think?Kathy Ottenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996558118761118634noreply@blogger.com